Im happy because all of my biils are paid
Im happy because i woke up and saw a brand new day
Im happy because i have food on my table
Im happy because my free
Im happy because im me
Im happy because i have my family
Im happy because im living
Im happy just for air and oxygen
Im happy just to be happy
This poem is a tone of pleasure because the tone set is happy.
Pain Pain Pain Sometimes I am in so much pain. All I want to do is cry. And sometimes the pain is so bad. I just want to die. I would be better of dead. Then to have to bear the pain. So if you have pain. Then you can understand how I feel. That the pain I am in is very very real. written 5/2/08 Posted 5/2/08
Susie Sunshine
This poem is tone of pain because the diction that is set is misery and pain that she feels in her life. Tones of passion
I'm standing outside of your bedroom window
Can you hear me singing you a song from down below
I hope you're listening to this song that I'm singing
I made it up for you and me to let you know
My high vocals seduce you for me
To fly along with you above our wicked skies
Feel the vibe of this music
Lift you off the ground
'Cause at the end of this song we will
Both come falling down
I've made my move now
It always works somehow
I want you to come and see
As you sing along with me
Now that I've got you
Just where I want you
I've made you me cherry pie
All because thanks to my.....
|| This poem is a tone of passion because it is setting a diction of him being desperate for her to come back to him.
You and I are friends
You laugh, I laugh
You cry, I cry
You scream, I scream
You run, I run
You jump, I jump
You jump off a
bridge, I'm going to
miss you buddy :)
Muhammad Raza Master
This poem has a diction of humorous because it is saying how they are friends till the end and that they will do all the same things but when it comes down to her killing herself that she wont do it.
Tones of animation
Lively, eager, excited, energetic, passionate, hopeful, ecstatic excited It was like being sixteen again,
Lovestruck in middle age
When one is supposed to be
Sensible and mature
Like comfortable shoes
And strong cheese.
But inside she wanted to shout
Tell the world she was in love
And this time around it was better
And yes, she was so excited
Like a schoolgirl, full of joy
Waiting for her phone to ring
And hear her lovers voice
Not afraid of the future
But confident and waiting
For him to sweep her off her feet!
Lynda Robson This poem is an example of animation because it is showing how some one is really excited about finding new hope or love. Tones of apathy Dull, colorless, different, resigned, defeated, helpless, hopeless, dry, monotonous, bored, insincere, apathetic,
Hope hope is a wonderful thing
hope is always nice IF you hope well for others
hope.........hope.............hope
hope for your self
hope for your family
hope for friends
hope for enemies
hope for the poor
hope for the rich
hope never starts
hope never ends
but hope will always go on
adriana salomon This poem is tone’s of apathy, because they saying hope. Tone of self- importance , arrogant, pompous, boastful, flippant, condescending, contemptuous, defiant, inflammatory, disdainful, irreverent, pretentious, patronizing, pedantic, moralistic
This world is not respectful.
She is rude, reckless,
Unforgiving all these years.
But when she sleeps she dreams
And when she dreams, she betrays herself,
I know she wants to love me then.
Abigail Marr
This poem is an example of the diction of submission and timidity because it is telling how the world is not respectful to people and objects.
Neutral Tones
Impartial, detached, objective, clinical, factual, informative Detached Shine the moon upon you skin,
and kiss the ripples and life between them.
To have and to hold.
A corner and nothing but streetlight fold.
Used and old.
To show her where she could be,
as lilyed lilacs scraped her face.
As her heart soothes and begins to race.
The monk smiles at want and cringes at need...
Where is she falling?
To swear suitors every night..
to relive it during closed eyes.
Vienna Cree This poem is an example of detachment because it shows how some one left some one else nut they still miss them.
Explanatory, didactic, condemnatory, indignant, puzzled, curious, sincere, questioning, uncertain, doubting, incredulous, critical, cynical, persuasive, coaxing, pleading, argumentative, skeptical, scholarly, confused
Question
Body my house
my horse my hound
what will I do
when you are fallen
Where will I sleep
How will I ride
What will I hunt
Where can I go
without my mount
all eager and quick
How will I know
in thicket ahead
is danger or treasure
when Body my good
bright dog is dead
How will it be
to lie in the sky
without roof or door
and wind for an eye
With cloud for shift
how will I hide?
This poem is a tone of question because they are stating a series if questions in the poem.
Tones of pleasure
Peaceful, satisfied, contented, happy, cheerful, joyful, playful, jubilant, euphoric, elated, intimate, seductive, affectionate
Im happy because i woke up and saw a brand new day
Im happy because i have food on my table
Im happy because my free
Im happy because im me
Im happy because i have my family
Im happy because im living
Im happy just for air and oxygen
Im happy just to be happy
This poem is a tone of pleasure because the tone set is happy.
Tones of pain
Worried, uneasy, troubled, disappointed, regretful, pain, vexed, annoyed, disgusted, miserable, mournful, sorrowful, sad, dismal, irritable, sullen, bitter, crushed, caustic, horrified, elegiac, melancholic, somber, ominous, apprehensive, foreboding, regretful,
Pain Pain Pain
Sometimes I am in so much pain. All I want to do is cry. And sometimes the pain is so bad. I just want to die. I would be better of dead. Then to have to bear the pain. So if you have pain. Then you can understand how I feel. That the pain I am in is very very real. written 5/2/08 Posted 5/2/08
Susie Sunshine
This poem is tone of pain because the diction that is set is misery and pain that she feels in her life.
Tones of passion
Hysterical, impulsive, desperate, frantic, serious, enraged, angry, jealous, outraged, irate, effusive, urgent, sentimental, restrained,
Can you hear me singing you a song from down below
I hope you're listening to this song that I'm singing
I made it up for you and me to let you know
My high vocals seduce you for me
To fly along with you above our wicked skies
Feel the vibe of this music
Lift you off the ground
'Cause at the end of this song we will
Both come falling down
I've made my move now
It always works somehow
I want you to come and see
As you sing along with me
Now that I've got you
Just where I want you
I've made you me cherry pie
All because thanks to my.....
This poem is a tone of passion because it is setting a diction of him being desperate for her to come back to him.
Tones of comedy
Satiric, amused, mocking, humorous, sarcastic, sardonic, ironic, bantering, mock-heroic, silly, joking, whimsical, dreamy, fanciful
Friend
You and I are friends
You laugh, I laugh
You cry, I cry
You scream, I scream
You run, I run
You jump, I jump
You jump off a
bridge, I'm going to
miss you buddy :)
Muhammad Raza Master
This poem has a diction of humorous because it is saying how they are friends till the end and that they will do all the same things but when it comes down to her killing herself that she wont do it.
Tones of animation
Lively, eager, excited, energetic, passionate, hopeful, ecstatic
excited
It was like being sixteen again,
Lovestruck in middle age
When one is supposed to be
Sensible and mature
Like comfortable shoes
And strong cheese.
But inside she wanted to shout
Tell the world she was in love
And this time around it was better
And yes, she was so excited
Like a schoolgirl, full of joy
Waiting for her phone to ring
And hear her lovers voice
Not afraid of the future
But confident and waiting
For him to sweep her off her feet!
Lynda Robson
This poem is an example of animation because it is showing how some one is really excited about finding new hope or love.
Tones of apathy
Dull, colorless, different, resigned, defeated, helpless, hopeless, dry, monotonous, bored, insincere, apathetic,
Hope
hope is a wonderful thing
hope is always nice IF you hope well for others
hope.........hope.............hope
hope for your self
hope for your family
hope for friends
hope for enemies
hope for the poor
hope for the rich
hope never starts
hope never ends
but hope will always go on
adriana salomon
This poem is tone’s of apathy, because they saying hope.
Tone of self- importance
, arrogant, pompous, boastful, flippant, condescending, contemptuous, defiant, inflammatory, disdainful, irreverent, pretentious, patronizing, pedantic, moralistic
Tones of submission and timidity
Docile, meek, timid, respectful, apologetic, reverent, groveling, fawning, fearful, terrified, awed, shocked, simpering, remorseful, sympathetic, compassionate, empathetic
This world is not respectful
She is rude, reckless,
Unforgiving all these years.
But when she sleeps she dreams
And when she dreams, she betrays herself,
I know she wants to love me then.
Abigail Marr
This poem is an example of the diction of submission and timidity because it is telling how the world is not respectful to people and objects.
Neutral Tones
Impartial, detached, objective, clinical, factual, informative
Detached
Shine the moon upon you skin,
and kiss the ripples and life between them.
To have and to hold.
A corner and nothing but streetlight fold.
Used and old.
To show her where she could be,
as lilyed lilacs scraped her face.
As her heart soothes and begins to race.
The monk smiles at want and cringes at need...
Where is she falling?
To swear suitors every night..
to relive it during closed eyes.
Vienna Cree
This poem is an example of detachment because it shows how some one left some one else nut they still miss them.