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Hansol Kim, Dayna Synagogue
10/26/10
Tones of pleasure
A Satisfied Mind
and dreams,
which
Which sometimes play their mind;
some
Some are crushed and broken,
in
In the scheme of things.
Yet
Yet others stay in focus,
for
for as long may live.
They
They build us our stand,
when
when the need may arise,
let
let us forget our failures;
we’ve
we’ve endured from to time.
That
That makes our life stable
giving
giving us the one thing,
everyone
everyone wants to find,
and that is a satisfied mind.
Every body has dreams, but sometimes it’s not. We are successful in realizing the dream. There are others dream keeps up in order to fulfill their purpose. Those dreams keep you going until you find what you want.
Tones of comedy
Amused
amusing the
way
way you can change
how
how the direction of
the
the tides as you manipulate
every
every emotion that
feeds
feeds this heart.
The
The reality sets in though,
these
these eyes are as blind
as
as you remember them.
I
I have seen tears and
realize
realize that there is no
truth
truth to them.
You
You chose this moment,
but
but you can admit to
your
your treason.
Keep
Keep on playing the victim
in
in your theater of lies,
but
but open you eyes and
see
see that it was you
who
who put the final nail
in the coffin.
This poem is about relationship. One person has betrayed the trust of the other person so they relationship is broken.
Tone of animation
Hopeful Heart
illusions –
Worn
Worn atop a satin sleeve;
Naivety
Naivety was dripping delusions –
'Twas
'Twas an open so deceive
A
A little further, pretty mind.
Her
Her whitened innocence, rare today;
And
And lest we another soul,
Leave
Leave and let the trust
Will
Will emanate a loving whole
For our appreciation; hear the plea.
Some person has believes and the writer’s saying don’t say or doing anything destroy those believe.
Tone of passion
Don't Be Jealous
have written
In
In their own of season
They
They are there they've awoken
To
To write down their reason
Lived
Lived out each gets spoken.
You
You are not not there
we’re
we’re all just glass way:
The
The things they've not bear
could
could they endure you lay?
No
No one but soul's song,
Walks
Walks the same falls on-
Don't
Don't silence the of you
Trying
Trying to fill other's space
Cause
Cause then nobody your songs
And the world would miss your grace.
This poem is about being jealous of someone’s life. It is trying to live their life instead of your own life. The writer say don’t try to be someone else because the world will miss out on your life.
Tone of pain
Worried
my face
and
and a whisper my mouth
just
just sitting at my couch
in
in a gloomy, depressed slouch
People
People cant see the pain
that
that is dwelling my eyes
they
they don’t want to know
and
and that’s why me dies
I’m
I’m so worried my boyfriend
and
and the trouble gotten in
I
I hope he to school
but the line that’s drawn is looking thin.
This poem is about a girl who is at home.she is upset because her boyfriend is in trouble. She is worried about what will happen to him.
Tones of logic
Confused
way out,
that
that sick feeling my stomach,
another
another lie just heart beating,
or
or so it seems.
Confused
Confused by whether by you,
or
or disappointed I trust you.
You
You were my my everything,
I
I walked away once more,
but
but you found way in,
broke
broke down my defenses.
Confused
Confused by whether by you,
or
or disappointed I trust you.
None
None can see to me,
now
now there's nothing to see,
just
just my vulnerability,
my
my bare and broken soul.
Confused
Confused by whether by you,
or
or disappointed I trust you.
Maybe
Maybe it was my fault,
pinned
pinned my hopes so different,
yet
yet you turned the same,
confirming
confirming my fears caring about.
Confused
Confused by whether by you,
or
or disappointed I trust you,
I
I once again trust you,
I
I once again trust you,
Once again I'm hurt by you...
This poem is about close friendship. The poet has been hurt by his or her friend. The poet says that, they are not sure confused or disappointed because he trusts his friend and his friend letting him down.
Tones of self -importance
Confident
you give
Words
Words you speak
Uncertainties
Uncertainties fade
Nothing
Nothing to peek
Never
Never judging
You
You listen well
Always
Always accepting
Whatever
Whatever I sell
Others
Others may run
You
You choose to stay
Condemned
Condemned I am
Two
Two hands you lay
Esteem
Esteem I lost
You
You found it still
Anger
Anger I toss
Respect
Respect you will
No
No one I deserve
You
You watch my back
Hope
Hope you serve
Faith
Faith never lack
Gems
Gems are precious
Priceless
Priceless you are
Gold
Gold is scarce
But You
But you are rare
This poem is about a person who support another person and that support gives them confidence.
Tones of submission and timidity
Tiny andThe timid star
One night inlover
What lad or what lass without love has e'er been?--
Miss Page won my dreamheart when I saw a timid and tiny star in sky.
I asked it why it was not so bright,
It told me I am happy within why you think I am tinybut sixteen;
But no prospect appear'd, my fond wishes to crown;
Her ruffles were lac'd and timid,
Everything that shines is not happy within,
I am living cool and peaceful life,
far away from evil and vice,
To shine and become bigshe wore a silk gown.
While I will haveissued forth in a more humble sphere,
With a coat you might see through--my best was threadbare;
Then what expectation to loose my might,
I love my lordwin a fair maid,
When the tongue or the dress never come to our aid?
But yet no great difference ought to oppose;
Her father made shoes, and I am happy and content
too far by my size and by my light
I asked it whytrade I ammade hose;
So that, if of true honour we judge not amiss,
My trade was, at least, a peg higher than his.
Besides, the shoe-maker had nothing to give;
Then should we unite, like you
I am not abletwo nothings must live.
Nay, should she attempt to be happy within, it toldcollect all her store,
If she gave me that you are likeherself, she could give me
that's why you don't shine and twinkle,
you remain sad and unhappy like no more.
If we chanc'd, which was seldom, to pass in the street,
My head made a bow, but my sizeeyes view'd my feet.
At her sight all my powers in confusion were found;
What was left of my heart sunk as low as the ground.
If at church on a Sunday I gave her a glance,
The instant she caught me my eyes turn'd ascance;
She might send a look, which by lovers alone
Is well understood; but, alas! Mine was gone.
When day-light was over I often crept out,
At the season when lovers and shine
because you are good within,
you are an honest and good soul,
you didn't betrayed anybody
,cats prowl about.
Through a hole in the shutter I asked it again why no body is happy with me,
everybodysometimes could see
The girl that I feel is against me,
whylov'd--whom I am feelingwish'd to love me.
Ten years I am trappedwas shackled, but never durst speak,
Though I saw my dear charmer at least once a week;
When another succeeded, who spoke as he ought,
While I lost my fair one by courting in conspiracy,
they are playing tricks against me,
to prove me bad mad and unworthy,
I can't dothought.
The poem is about young man who loves a young woman he is too shy to say anything for me,
It told me that you will one day
will be relievedto her. And ten years he admires her from all these allegations indeed.
I gave it thanks and I came to understand that,
it was not tinya distance, but someone else comes along and timid.... wins her.

Tones of passion
Anger Anger Anger
Alexander Sergeyevich Pushkin
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/curious-12/
Give me just a clue! When you areThis poem is about how when people get curious aboutthey want to know what someone did or is going to do you juston and they want to know right then and now. You try to get as much information asnow! If you can. You start todont tell them they will get mad if that person doesn’t tellat you.
Tones of pleasure
The Peaceful Shepard
Beautiful Grim
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/close-those-sad-sad-eyes/
WhenThis poem is about sadness. When you are
Tones of comedy
Amused
Fairie Helper
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
SomeThis poem is about how some people are amused and someothers are serious and not amused.not. This person and sometimes not.
Tonesnot amused.
Tones of animation
\
Eager Eyes
Eyes watch me,
Stuart Logan
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
People withThis poem is about eager eyes that look at youwatching him and how they make you feel like running away from themsure he does the right things and hiding. Theydoesn't do anything wrong. The eyes that are controlling and feel like theywatching him are powerfull. They watch youGod's eyes.
Tones of apathy
I'm Bored (a short poem)
I'm bored to death
Can that be even true
Well, I am still alive
I need something to do
I gotta find some intrest
But I don't know what
I can't think of anything
My mind's door is shut
Katherine Sessor
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
This poem is about someone who is bored to death and make sure that youthey have nothing to. He realy wants to find something to do.
Tones of submission and timidity
I Was Awed
The wind blows,
transparent light,
and the sun,
glows crimson bright.
the sky is softest hue of blue
the grass is anything but white
the birds bird-call to the sight
they are doingat a great height.
But there’s a backlight to it all.
I was mauling the right thing.mud
But this is what I saw.
And I was awed.
Hannah Liu
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
This poem is about how she was awed at the sight of nature and how it is so beautiful and such an amazing sight.

Alexander Sergeyevich Pushkin
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/curious-12/
Give me just a clue! When you areThis poem is about how when people get curious aboutthey want to know what someone did or is going to do you juston and they want to know right then and now. You try to get as much information asnow! If you can. You start todont tell them they will get mad if that person doesn’t tellat you.
Tones of pleasure
The Peaceful Shepard
Beautiful Grim
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/close-those-sad-sad-eyes/
WhenThis poem is about sadness. When you are
Tones of comedy
Amused
Fairie Helper
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
SomeThis poem is about how some people are amused and someothers are serious and not amused.not. This person and sometimes not.
Tonesnot amused.
Tones of animation
\
Eager Eyes
Eyes watch me,
Stuart Logan
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
People withThis poem is about eager eyes that look at youwatching him and how they make you feel like running away from themsure he does the right things and hiding. Theydoesn't do anything wrong. The eyes that are controlling and feel like theywatching him are powerfull. They watch youGod's eyes.
Tones of apathy
I'm Bored (a short poem)
I'm bored to death
Can that be even true
Well, I am still alive
I need something to do
I gotta find some intrest
But I don't know what
I can't think of anything
My mind's door is shut
Katherine Sessor
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
This poem is about someone who is bored to death and make sure that youthey have nothing to. He realy wants to find something to do.
Tones of submission and timidity
I Was Awed
The wind blows,
transparent light,
and the sun,
glows crimson bright.
the sky is softest hue of blue
the grass is anything but white
the birds bird-call to the sight
they are doingat a great height.
But there’s a backlight to it all.
I was mauling the right thing.mud
But this is what I saw.
And I was awed.
Hannah Liu
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
This poem is about how she was awed at the sight of nature and how it is so beautiful and such an amazing sight.

Stuart Logan
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
are powerfull. They watch you dont want to be near them and feel like running awaymake sure that you are doing the right thing.

Robert Lee Frost
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/peaceful-shepard-the/
to fallow.
Tones of pain
Close those Sad Sad Eyes
Stuart Logan
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
people willPeople with eager eyes at you are weird andmake you feel are powerfull. They watch you and make sure that you are doing the right thing.

Robert Lee Frost
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/peaceful-shepard-the/
to fallow.
Tones of pain
Close those Sad Sad Eyes
Stuart Logan
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem
people willPeople with eager eyes at you are weird andmake you feel are powerfull. you dont want to be near them and feel like running away

5) Write your paragraph and make it BOLD
6) When you are done with 8 different tones, copy and paste your entire Word document onto your page of the wiki
the wiki.
Tone list
Tones of logic
A merciful Mirage
That makes the living possible
the lives.
Emily
Emily Dickinson
The
The diction and seem bad.
Tones of pleasure
seductive, affectionate
Joy
Joy and Pleasure
Now, joy is born of parents poor,
And pleasure of our richer kind;
With little care if others hear;
But pleasure then is cold and dumb,
strangers near.
William
William Henry Davies
||
The diction and details created in the tone of the poem is joyful and peaceful. The poem is expressing nature life. It’s showing how living things that we people have at home are joyful. It’s explaining how the sounds of birds make some people day.
Tones of pain
Somewhere far-away from me, and I’ll make a vow
That once you’ve done the change, what became of you I’ll never want to know
Anukka D....
The diction and details show that she is disappointed. It is showing that someone did something that she didn’t approve of. That disappointment changed her life. “ What became of you I’ll never want to know” those words show how upset she is over the decision the other person made.
Tones of passion
sentimental, restrained,
Angry
I was angry with a friend
Tones of apathy
Dull, colorless, indifferent, resigned, defeated, helpless, hopeless, dry, monotonous, bored, insincere, apathetic,
I,mI’m Bored
I'm bored to death
Can that be even true
My mind's door is shut
Katherine Sessor
is really bored.bored and hopeless. Also that
Tones of self-importance
Confident,Confident
, arrogant, pompous, pedantic, moralistic
Confident
Being over confident, isn't in
your best interest, as of now.
Instead of wasting time talking,
put all your available energy,
into doing. Whatever you have
in mind, use this time, in what
you could be pursuing. There's
a lot of things, you can get involved
with, that would make a difference,
in someones life. There's no need,
to come off too strong. Just do what
your heart tells you and things are
bound to move along. When the time
comes, you'll look back and you'll be
happy you toned things down, a peg
or two. Now, you can be over confident,
as everybody, is proud of you!
Audrey Heller
The diction and detail creates a tone of confident. The poem shows that confidents would take you anywhere you want to be. If you only do what you have in mind, and use this time to do what you need to do. Also, do what your heart is telling you. And that if you are confident you are proud of you as everybody else around you.
Tones of submission and timidity
Docile, meek, timid, respectful, apologetic, reverent, groveling, fawning, fearful, terrified, awed, shocked, simpering, remorseful, sympathetic, compassionate, empathetic
Terrified
dark and cold
his face was bold
blood and such all over
pain and tears within
not showing not hiding
just there
he hurt me badly
i never thought this would happen
i was only 6 when it happened
i didnt want to but
he made me
and i was
terrified
charlotte marie peachey
The diction and details creates a tone of terrified and shocked. Shocked because she never thought that he was going to hit her. When she was only six it happen to her. She was terrified because she didn’t know what to do with him. Especially in the mood he was, his face dark and cold.
Neutral Tones
Impartial, detached, objective, clinical, factual, informative

5) Write your paragraph and make it BOLD
6) When you are done with 8 different tones, copy and paste your entire Word document onto your page of the wiki
the wiki.
Tone list
Tones of logic
A merciful Mirage
That makes the living possible
the lives.
Emily
Emily Dickinson
The
The diction and seem bad.
Tones of pleasure
seductive, affectionate
Joy
Joy and Pleasure
Now, joy is born of parents poor,
And pleasure of our richer kind;
With little care if others hear;
But pleasure then is cold and dumb,
strangers near.
William
William Henry Davies
||
The diction and details created in the tone of the poem is joyful and peaceful. The poem is expressing nature life. It’s showing how living things that we people have at home are joyful. It’s explaining how the sounds of birds make some people day.
Tones of pain
Somewhere far-away from me, and I’ll make a vow
That once you’ve done the change, what became of you I’ll never want to know
Anukka D....
The diction and details show that she is disappointed. It is showing that someone did something that she didn’t approve of. That disappointment changed her life. “ What became of you I’ll never want to know” those words show how upset she is over the decision the other person made.
Tones of passion
Tones of apathy
Dull, colorless, indifferent, resigned, defeated, helpless, hopeless, dry, monotonous, bored, insincere, apathetic,
I,mI’m Bored
I'm bored to death
Can that be even true
My mind's door is shut
Katherine Sessor
is really bored.bored and hopeless. Also that
Tones of self-importance
Confident,Confident
, arrogant, pompous, pedantic, moralistic
Confident
Being over confident, isn't in
your best interest, as of now.
Instead of wasting time talking,
put all your available energy,
into doing. Whatever you have
in mind, use this time, in what
you could be pursuing. There's
a lot of things, you can get involved
with, that would make a difference,
in someones life. There's no need,
to come off too strong. Just do what
your heart tells you and things are
bound to move along. When the time
comes, you'll look back and you'll be
happy you toned things down, a peg
or two. Now, you can be over confident,
as everybody, is proud of you!
Audrey Heller
The diction and detail creates a tone of confident. The poem shows that confidents would take you anywhere you want to be. If you only do what you have in mind, and use this time to do what you need to do. Also, do what your heart is telling you. And that if you are confident you are proud of you as everybody else around you.
Tones of submission and timidity
Docile, meek, timid, respectful, apologetic, reverent, groveling, fawning, fearful, terrified, awed, shocked, simpering, remorseful, sympathetic, compassionate, empathetic
Terrified
dark and cold
his face was bold
blood and such all over
pain and tears within
not showing not hiding
just there
he hurt me badly
i never thought this would happen
i was only 6 when it happened
i didnt want to but
he made me
and i was
terrified
charlotte marie peachey
The diction and details creates a tone of terrified and shocked. Shocked because she never thought that he was going to hit her. When she was only six it happen to her. She was terrified because she didn’t know what to do with him. Especially in the mood he was, his face dark and cold.
Neutral Tones
Impartial, detached, objective, clinical, factual, informative

LL IN:
Your Names: Donald Woullard and Brittney Zepeda
Date: 10/27/10
Mrs. Oestreich’s English 1
Period: 1
Directions:
Choose eight different tones from the tone list and find a poem for each tone.
Copy and paste the poem into a Microsoft Word document.
Define the tone.
Write a paragraph that explains how the diction and details develop the tone of the poem.
Copy and paste all of your Word document into your page on the wiki for your period (for both student
TO DO:
1) Copy and paste the tones into Word
2) File> Save as > Tone List – your last name, your partner’s last name
3) Copy and paste your poem under the appropriate tone in the Word Document
4) Bold and underline the exact tone in Word
5) Write your paragraph and make it BOLD
6) When you are done with 8 different tones, copy and paste your entire Word document onto your page of the wiki
7) Then, copy and paste the entire Word document onto your partner’s page of the wiki.
Tone list
Tones of logic
Explanatory, didactic, condemnatory, indignant, puzzled, curious, sincere, questioning, uncertain, doubting, incredulous, critical, cynical, persuasive, coaxing, pleading, argumentative, skeptical, scholarly, confused
Sincere Friendship
Friendship is a sheltering tree
Where grows flower of love
That extend it branches
Like a bliss of heaven above
For friendship is a rare gift
And a source of pleasure
That brings fun and joy
More than any treasure
And it is like a garden
Where grows grass green
Just like that in friendship
There is nothing mean
And friendship is unselfish
And it is also kind
that brings you a lot of fain
And pleasure's peace of mind
because it is a sunshine
That gives it bright light
And makes everything gloomy
In the garden of delight.
Seema Chowdhury
The diction and description of the poem makes it a tone of sincere. Friendship is used as a sheltering tree like something that may shelter you. Or it can be a source of pleasure and peace. Also its light sunlight that gives off bright lights. The tone of the poem is sincere.
Tones of pleasure
Peaceful, satisfied, contented, happy, cheerful, joyful, playful, jubilant, euphoric, elated, intimate, seductive, affectionate
Worried, uneasy, troubled, disappointed, regretful, vexed, annoyed, disgusted, miserable, mournful, sorrowful, sad, dismal, irritable, sullen, bitter, crushed, caustic, horrified, elegiac, melancholic, somber, ominous, apprehensive, foreboding, regretful,
Pain, Pain, Pain
Posted 5/2/08
The diction and details in the poem makes it a miserable tone. “pain” the author is in pain and she can’t take it. “dead” the author is ready to die and give up the pain. “bear” it is hard to bear the pain he/she has. The tone of the poem is miserable.
Susie Sunshine
Marisa Taylor
The diction and description of the poem makes it a sentimental tone. They use “passion” to show the passion they have for the oceans or the stars. They use “power” as the power to love something so much. The tone of the poem is sentimental.
Maria Luisa Taylor
Tones of comedy
dreamy, fanciful
Tones of animation
Lively, eager, excited, energetic, passionate, hopeful, ecstatic
Animation of Your Kiss
Your kisses
Are flowing
Through whining pebbles
And widening like river.
While the small
Fishes are splashing
In the blood-and
There is a kingfisher
On my vein.
anushmadhu P.Bharathi
The diction and description of the poem makes it a tone. In the poem the author talks about the kisses being flowing. Also the author uses fishing splashing as an example of the way he feels. The tone of the poem is passionate.
Tones of apathy
Dull, colorless, indifferent, resigned, defeated, helpless, hopeless, dry, monotonous, bored, insincere, apathetic,
Helpless
He was my best friend
He was my lover
He was frustrated
I couldn't help.
He needed more
He wanted me
He wished for us
I couldn't help.
I was his best friend
I was his lover
I was frustrated
He couldn't help.
I needed more
I wanted him
I wished for us
He couldn't help.
To change was to is
Past tense to present
To stop the pain
Where is the help?
Just Me Reuter
The diction and the description of the poem is helpless. The person lost his/her best friend and now he/she feels helpless and lost. He wants help and needs help from someone but can’t get help. The tone of the poem is helpless.
Tones of self-importance
Confident, arrogant, pompous, boastful, flippant, condescending, contemptuous, defiant, inflammatory, disdainful, irreverent, pretentious, patronizing, pedantic, moralistic
I'm Self-confident
With your self-confidence, you will succeed
No longer will your heart painfully bleed
Tones of submission and timidity
Docile, meek, timid, respectful, apologetic, reverent, groveling, fawning, fearful, terrified, awed, shocked, simpering, remorseful, sympathetic, compassionate, empathetic
A timid King
The script was given in time
It's too heavy and really a challenge.
He was chosen as the King.
He cried; And he wants to tell the Playwright
' Give me a small part in your massive drama
As I am a born pauper.
The crown isn't fits for my head
And I am scared of the sword.
The rough shinning dress tingles my soul
And I shall be fainted at the stage
When curtain raises.'
But the thorough bred horse neighs
And refuses any other King rides on its saddle.
nimal dunuhinga
The description and diction of the poem makes a tone of timid. The king doesn’t feel that he should be king when he says that the crown doesn’t fit his head. He thinks less of him self and calls himself a poor pauper. The tone of the poem is timid.
Neutral Tones
factual, informative

LL
LL IN:
Your
Your Names:
Date:Donald Woullard and Brittney Zepeda
Date: 10/27/10
Mrs. Oestreich’s English 1
Period:
Directions:
Choose1
Directions:
Choose eight different each tone.
Copy
Copy and paste Word document.
Define
Define the tone.
Write
Write a paragraph the poem.
Copy
Copy and paste both student
TO DO:
1) Copy and paste the tones into Word
5) Write your paragraph and make it BOLD
6) When you are done with 8 different tones, copy and paste your entire Word document onto your page of the wiki
the wiki.
Tone list
Tones of logic
And makes everything gloomy
In the garden of delight.
Seema Chowdhury
The
The diction thisand description of the poem makes it a sincere tone of sincere. Friendship is used as a sheltering tree like something that may shelter you. Or it can be a source of pleasure and peace. Also its light sunlight that gives off bright lights. The tone of the poem is sincere.
Tones of pleasure
Peaceful, satisfied, contented, happy, cheerful, joyful, playful, jubilant, euphoric, elated, intimate, seductive, affectionate
Worried, uneasy, troubled, disappointed, regretful, vexed, annoyed, disgusted, miserable, mournful, sorrowful, sad, dismal, irritable, sullen, bitter, crushed, caustic, horrified, elegiac, melancholic, somber, ominous, apprehensive, foreboding, regretful,
Pain, Pain, Pain
Posted 5/2/08
The diction and details in the poem makes it a miserable tone. “pain” the author is in pain and she can’t take it. “dead” the author is ready to die and give up the pain. “bear” it is hard to bear the pain he/she has. The tone of the poem is miserable.
Susie Sunshine
Marisa Taylor
The diction and description of the poem makes it a sentimental tone. They use “passion” to show the passion they have for the oceans or the stars. They use “power” as the power to love something so much. The tone of the poem is sentimental.
Maria Luisa Taylor
Tones of comedy
dreamy, fanciful
Tones of animation
Lively, eager, excited, energetic, passionate, hopeful, ecstatic
Animation of Your Kiss
Your kisses
Are flowing
Through whining pebbles
And widening like river.
While the small
Fishes are splashing
In the blood-and
There is a kingfisher
On my vein.
anushmadhu P.Bharathi
The diction and description of the poem makes it a tone. In the poem the author talks about the kisses being flowing. Also the author uses fishing splashing as an example of the way he feels. The tone of the poem is passionate.
Tones of apathy
Dull, colorless, indifferent, resigned, defeated, helpless, hopeless, dry, monotonous, bored, insincere, apathetic,
Helpless
He was my best friend
He was my lover
He was frustrated
I couldn't help.
He needed more
He wanted me
He wished for us
I couldn't help.
I was his best friend
I was his lover
I was frustrated
He couldn't help.
I needed more
I wanted him
I wished for us
He couldn't help.
To change was to is
Past tense to present
To stop the pain
Where is the help?
Just Me Reuter
The diction and the description of the poem is helpless. The person lost his/her best friend and now he/she feels helpless and lost. He wants help and needs help from someone but can’t get help. The tone of the poem is helpless.
Tones of self-importance
Confident, arrogant, pompous, boastful, flippant, condescending, contemptuous, defiant, inflammatory, disdainful, irreverent, pretentious, patronizing, pedantic, moralistic
I'm Self-confident
With your self-confidence, you will succeed
No longer will your heart painfully bleed
Tones of submission and timidity
Docile, meek, timid, respectful, apologetic, reverent, groveling, fawning, fearful, terrified, awed, shocked, simpering, remorseful, sympathetic, compassionate, empathetic
A timid King
The script was given in time
It's too heavy and really a challenge.
He was chosen as the King.
He cried; And he wants to tell the Playwright
' Give me a small part in your massive drama
As I am a born pauper.
The crown isn't fits for my head
And I am scared of the sword.
The rough shinning dress tingles my soul
And I shall be fainted at the stage
When curtain raises.'
But the thorough bred horse neighs
And refuses any other King rides on its saddle.
nimal dunuhinga
The description and diction of the poem makes a tone of timid. The king doesn’t feel that he should be king when he says that the crown doesn’t fit his head. He thinks less of him self and calls himself a poor pauper. The tone of the poem is timid.
Neutral Tones
factual, informative